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My family Please help me to edit. Thanks. My Family. Hi everyone! My name is Hien. I am forty-four years old. It is my honor to be here to talk with you about my family. There are four members in my family, they are my wife, my daughter, my son and me. My wife’s name is Thuy. She is fourty-two years old. She works in an Insurance company in Ha Noi. She likes cooking in her free time. All the food my wife cooks is great. Besides, my wife likes doing exercise, too. When I come home after work, she and I usually go jogging around the village together. I love this time. My daughter’s name is Thu. She is twenty years old. She loves animals and likes to play with a cat at my home. She likes listening to music and plays piano in her spare time. Now, she is studying at a university. She wishes to go abroad to study after graduating. My son’s name is Dung. He is fourteen years old. He is in grade 8 at Pascal secondary school. He likes watching cartoon programs on television. Special, he likes playing football and cycling. We all have a busy life in daytime. However, in the evening after dinner, we sit together in the living-room talking, sometimes watching a comedy. Then my children go to their own rooms. On weekend, and with spare time, my family often visit my mother, it is very meaningful and funny. We love each other very much and expect to live together under the same roof forever. I feel very happy to live with my family.

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My Family.
Hi everyone! My name is Hien. I am forty-four years old.
It is my honor to be here to talk with you about my family.
There are four members in my family, they are my wife, my daughter, my son and me.
My wife’s name is Thuy. She is fourty-two years old. She works in an Insurance company in Ha Noi. She likes cooking in her free time. All the food my wife cooks is great. Besides, my wife likes doing exercise, too. When I come home after work, she and I usually go jogging around the village together. I love this time.
My daughter’s name is Thu. She is twenty years old. She loves animals and likes to play with our cat a cat at my home. She likes listening to music and plays the piano in her spare time. Now, she is studying at a university. She wishes to go abroad to study after graduating.
My son’s name is Dung. He is fourteen years old. He is in grade 8 at Pascal secondary school. He likes watching cartoon programs on television. Special, he likes playing football and cycling.
We all have a busy life in daytime. However, in the evening after dinner, we sit together in the living-room talking, sometimes watching a comedy. Then my children go to their own rooms. On weekends, and in spare time, my family often visit my mother, it is very meaningful and funny. We love each other very much and expect to live together under the same roof forever. I feel very happy to live with my family.

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