What adventure I want to take.
It’s very interesting to travel around the world. Some people like quite vacations with lying on the beach, sunbathing, drinking coctails, taking a massage, so do I. But it’s not the only type of vacation I prefer. Sometimes I want to take a ticket to the country lying in the mountains and go trekking. There are many interesting routes in Himalayas. One of the Himalayan country is Nepal. It is unique country with 40% of it’s area located on the high above 3000 metres. The Everest which is the highest mountain on planet is located there. If you find the group of tourists with the same interests, you can meet in Kolkata, the capital on Nepal, and then can go to on your route. The good thing for such journey that you couldn’t take tent, sleeping bag and the other stuff with you. Everything you need in the evening you can find in the camp so you couldn’t walk long paths with heavy backpack. You just carry the most required things like toothbrush, undewear, camera, etc. While you are walking you just looking around to amazing scenic: high mountains with snow hats, blue lakes, green forests and fields. The beautiful untouched wild nature is around you and all you need is breath fresh air and catch the moment.
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What adventure I want to take.
It’s very interesting to travel around the world. Some people like quiet vacations with lying on the beach, sunbathing, drinking cocktails, taking a massage, as do I. However, it’s not the only type of vacation I prefer. Sometimes I want to take a ticket to a country lying in the mountains and go trekking. There are many interesting routes in the Himalayas. One of the Himalayan countries is Nepal. It is a unique country with 40% of it’s area located on the high above 3000 meters in altitude. Mount Everest, which is the highest mountain on the planet, is located there. If you find a group of tourists with the same interests, you can meet in Kolkata, the capital on Nepal, and then can go to on your route. A good thing for such journey is that you needn't take a tent, a sleeping bag and the other stuff with you. Everything you need in the evening you can find in the camp so that you don't need to walk long paths with a heavy backpack. You just carry the most required things like a toothbrush, underwear, a camera, etc. While you are walking, you can looking around and see amazing scenery: high mountains with snow covered peaks, blue lakes, green forests and fields. The beautiful untouched wild nature is around you and all you need is to breath the fresh air and catch the moment.Thank you for your corrections))
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What /The adventure I want to take.
It’s very interesting to travel around the world. Some people like to spend their vacationsBut this is not the only type of vacation I like to take.prefer. Sometimes, I also want to buy take a ticket to a the country where there are lying in the mountains for me to and go trekking.> Sometimes, I also like to spend my vacation in a mountainous country where I can go trekking.
There are many interesting routes in Himalayas.> There are many interesting places like that in the Himalayas.
One of the Himalayan countries is Nepal.> On of those places is in the Himalayan country of Nepal.
It is unique country, with 40% of its land surface it’s area located on the high above 3000 metres above sea level.
The Mount Everest, which is the highest mountain on earth, planet is located there.
If you find the group of tourists with the same interests, you can meet in Kolkata, the capital on Nepal, and then can go to on your route. > If you want to meet fellow tourists with similar interest in trekking, you can find a lot of them in Kolkata, the capital of Nepal. Then, you can talk to them to find out which are the best trekking routes for trekkers such as you.
The good thing about trekking in this country is for such journey that you do not have to couldn’t take your tent, your sleeping bag and the other gears along with you.
Everything you need in the evening, you can find in the camp, so you don't have couldn’t walk around long paths with a heavy backpack when you go out for a long hike. > All the things you need for the night are available at a camp nearby, so you do not have to carry all these heavy gears in your backpack when you go out for a long hike. You just carry the most required things like toothbrush, undewear, camera, etc.> You just have to bring some personal items or important things along with you, such as toothbrush, underwear and camera .
( With "like /such as/for example", you don't have to use "etc", because these words are already telling us that you are going to name a few , not all of them. > The things to bring along with you are a toothbrush, a pair of underwear, your camera, etc., anything you think is important for the hike.
While you are walking you just looking around to amazing scenic: high mountains with snow hats, blue lakes, green forests and fields.
> While you are walking, you should look around and enjoy the amazing scenic sights along the way: the high mountains with snow capped peaks in the horizon, and the green forests and fields below.
The beautiful untouched wild nature is around you and all you need is breath fresh air and catch the moment.
> Beautiful wild untouched nature
surrounds you, and all you need to do is to take in the fresh air and enjoy the magic moment/ and live for the moment. live for the moment > to live only for the pleasures of the present time without planning for the future. Magic moment > a short period of time which is very special, especially because something happens which makes you very happy
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