Role of education in society
If there is a vital thing in modern lives, I will confirm that it is education. From my view point, pedagogical is great platform which lead to success. There are lots of its advantages which we can not find.
On the other hand, education must prepare the student for future occupational positions. This is an big opportunity to look for jobs. You will fell more confident when bring a CV with good knowledge, high quality, great behavior. Therefore, the employer will be pleased with everything which you bring. Thanks to studying, you can apply useful understanding of school to my field. Step by step, the experiences in employment is very exciting. It is not only make you more mature, but also ready to enter your life.
Futhermore, schools are the settings in which students develop a variety of interpersonal skills, needed for entering into friendship, participating in community affaires, and relating to others in workplace. As for me, I am the semester second student of a pedagogical university. So, I realized that individual skills of a teacher such as: presentation, writing board, applying technology in lesson plan are very essential and necessary. This is a foundation to bring knowledge for your student. Besides, they can take part in society, volunteer activities and share hard situation. It is a chance which help you active, creative and master yourself.
Last but not least, education is also positive experiences for students themselves and communities as well. By studying in the school, students would have more friends, since many schools such as: universities are accepting students from various local areas and some even from overseas. Therefore, students would have the chance in expanding their networks and learning new languages and cultures as well.
To sum up, we do not deny the important of education in our lives. It has a part in building many talented people, active and dynamic for society that helping our country more and more developing.
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The role of Education in society
If there is a vital thing in the modern lives( why you write"lives" in this case?), I will confirm that it is education. From my viewpoint, pedagogical( it is a adj!!!) is great platform which leads to success. There are lots of its advantages which we can not find.On the other hand, education must prepare the student for future occupational positions ( this sentece is not clear about meaning). This is an big opportunity to look for jobs. You will fell more confident when bring a CV with good knowledge, high quality, great behavior( after when is a clause, your clause don't have Subject). Therefore, the employer will be pleased with everything which you bring. Thanks to studying, you can apply useful understanding of school to my field. Step by step, the experiences in employment is very exciting. It is not only make you more mature, but also to be ready to enter your life.
Futhermore, schools are the settings in which students develop a variety of interpersonal skills, needed (???) or entering into friendship, participating in community affaires, and relating to others in workplace. As for me, I am the semester second student(??) of a pedagogical university. So ( dont write "so" in writing), I realized that individual skills of a teacher such as: presentation, writing board, applying technology in lesson plan are very essential and necessary. This is a foundation to bring knowledge for your student. Besides, they can take part in society, volunteer activities and share hard situation. It is a chance which help you active, creative and master yourself.
Last but not least, education is also positive experiences( sai Ngữ pháp) for students themselves and communities as well. By studying in the school, students would have more friends, since( sao lại dùng since ở đây?) many schools such as: universities are accepting students from various local areas and some even from overseas. Therefore, students would have the chance in expanding their networks and learning new languages and cultures as well.
To sum up, we do not deny the important importance of education in our lives. It has a part in building many talented people, active and dynamic for society that helping our country more and more developing.
Cậu viết khá tốt! Cậu nên chú ý về mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn nhé, với lại cậu cũng search lại cách dùng such as nhé :))
Các vế trong câu cần cân bằng nhé cậu. Ví dụ câu này I realized that individual skills of a teacher such as: presentation, writing board, applying technology in lesson plan are very essential and necessary sao lại có vế là N, vế khác là Ving nhỉ. Câu mất cân bằng rồi :))
Chăm chỉ viết bài nhé cậu :))
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