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Today I will begin writing diary for to promote my English level.Let me thinking a minute about today.I feel I always done some stupid sting.l don't know why l do this.Maybe I just want find a feeling to prove I was important.I very worry about my job in these last few day.I afraid I can't get job I like.And I don't know what my boyfriend thinking.He always say he love me .But I don't know.The other people always telk to me .He hardly telk to me. Always on working. Maybe that is man life. Or maybe he don't love me. I wonder.
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Today, I will begin writing a diary for to promote to improve my English level. Let me thinking a minute think for a moment about today. I feel I always done some stupid sting I always feel that I've always done something stupid/I feel that I have always done some stupid things, l don't know why l do this it/them. Maybe I just want find a feeling to prove I was important. I very worry I worry a lot about my job in these last few day nowadays.I am afraid that I can't get the/a job that I like. And I don't know what my boyfriend is thinking.He always says that he loves me .But I don't know.The other people always tell talk to me .He hardly talk talks to me, he says he is always working. Always on working. Maybe that is a man's life. Or maybe he don't doesn't love me. I wonder.*
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Today, I will begin writing diary for to promote improve (<--"Promote" = 提升. "Improve" = 加强/进步.) my English level. Let me thinking a minute about today. I feel I have always done some stupid sting actions. l don't know why l do this them. Maybe I just wanted to (<--过去时态) find a feeling to prove I was important. I have been very worried about my job in these last few days. I am afraid I can't get the job I like, and I don't know what my boyfriend is thinking. He always says (<--主语动词协议) he loves me, but I don't know. The other people always talk to me, but he hardly talks to me and always on says he is working. Maybe that is a man's life, or maybe he don't doesn't love me. I wonder.
你好，Ting！写得还好。错误多没关系，我们都是来这里学语言的。请注意英文的标点符号规则：逗号和句号后面要有空格（前面没有）。
有问题请别怕问 =)
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