Incidents a few days ago
Yesterday, I visited my grandfather in the hospital. I am glad to have talked with him and gave him a portrait of him. On the next visiting, I want to bring a branch of a peach tree that is in full bloom now. Recently, I started to walk with my second sister at night because my first sister's wedding is going to happen on April 8. I am looking forward to attending it. So I have to strive to lose weight by exercising and dieting.
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Incidents of a few days ago
Yesterday, I visited my grandfather in hospital. I'm glad to have talked with him and to have given him a portrait*. On the next visit, I want to bring a branch of a peach tree that is in full bloom now.Recently, I started to walk with my second sister at night because my first sister's wedding is going to happen on April 8. I am looking forward to attending it. So I have to strive to lose weight by exercising and dieting.
*if I understand you right: you were happy giving grandfather a portrait.
Very well written!
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Incidents a few days ago (I like "event" better than "incident" or maybe some other word you might find. "incident" sounds like 事件）
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