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Competition Someone has told me that workplace just like a battlefield or arena. I don`t know. And I think if it is it would be terrible. I don`t want to hurt anyone one around me. And I never gonna to take advantage of somebody to make a promotion for myself. My friends remind and urge me to be strong all the time. So that nobody can bully or take advantage of you. In their words, workplace is cruel. And I agreed with them. What I did was totally accordance with that and set it as my criterion [be strong and fright for something you should own]. I realized that strongness for strongness`s sake. That is not the real me. Don`t go to the path that is good in someone`s eye. Even though the path is good but if it is not fit you, it means nothing. So just be yourself. Even though it might be a little bit clumsy. But I am what I am.

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Someone (has) told me that the workplace is just like a battlefield or an arena. I don`t know. And I think if it is, it would be terrible. I don`t want to hurt anyone one around me. And I am never gonnagoing to take advantage of somebody to make a promotion for myself.("gonna" is slang.  You could also say "I would never take advantage of somebody to get a promotion for myself." "get" is a little better than "make" with "promotion") My friends remind and urge me to be strong all the time. So that nobody can bully or take advantage of you.("me" is better than "you" here because its more consistent with the previous sentence "urge me") In their words, the workplace is cruel. And I agreed with them. What I did was totally in accordance with that and set it as my criterion [be strong and frightfight for something you should own].("and setting that as my criterion" is a little better "fight for what's yours" is usually the phrase.  "something you should own" suggests just anything, something... like "one should own a cell phone" "fight for a cell phone?") I realized that strongnessstrength for strongnessstrength`s sake.(Or: "strength just for the sake of strength") That is not the real me. Don`t go todown the path that is good in someone`s eye.(Much better would be "don't go down a path just because it is good in someone else's eyes" what you have suggests that one should not go down any path that someone else thinks is good) Even though the path is good, but if it is not fit for you, it means nothing.("even though" and "but" are confusing together. You could also say "if it is not fitting for you" or "if it does not fit you") So just be yourself. Even though it might be a little bit clumsy. But I am what I am.

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