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<Gree, Anger and Ignorance> I'd like to post this writing on linkedin. could you pleas correct my expression and grammatical errors or unclear sentences? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ <Gree, Anger and Ignorance> In Budhism, it is said that humans have three poisons. Those are 'Greed', 'Anger', 'Ignorance' Somone has asked me which is the most deadly poisonous among those three. I said. "If you happened to have to get a surgery of acute appendicitis, then you have to choose one out of three surgeons. 'Greedy Doctor', 'Angry Doctor', and 'A doctor ignorant of medicine'... Who are you the most unwilling to get your surgery done by?" He answered, 'the ignorant one' Enterpirses are same as this. Among Greedy CEO, Angry CEO, and Ignorant CEO, the most deadly poisonous is ignorant one. Ignorant CEO not only spoils himself and his employees but spoils company, market, and evern worse, damages the world that puts trust on the enterprise. Other leaders are the same as this. When we are abhorant of a certain leader is; Not because he made a fortune with unright way, Not because his anger has hurt others around him. It is because he was much too ignorant as a leader. Among three poisons of human, 'Ignorance' is the most toxic, hazordous and deadly.

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I'd like to post this writing on linkedin. could you pleas correct my expression and grammatical errors or unclear sentences?

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In Budhism, it is said that humans have three poisons.
Those are 'Greed', 'Anger', 'Ignorance'

Somone has asked me which is the most deadly poisonous among those three.
I said.
"If you happened to have to get a surgery of acute appendicitis, then you have to choose one out of three surgeons.
'Greedy Doctor', 'Angry Doctor', and 'A doctor ignorant of medicine'...
Who are you the most unwilling to get your surgery done by?"

He answered,
'the ignorant one'


Enterpirses are same as this.

Among Greedy CEO, Angry CEO, and Ignorant CEO, the WORST is THE ignorant one.
Ignorant CEO IS not only DETRIMENTAL TO himself/HERSELF and his /HER employees, but IS ALSO PERILOUS TO THE company, the market, and even worse, damages the world that  trusts the enterprise.

Other leaders are MUCH LIKE THIS CEO.

When we are abhorant of a certain leader ;
Not because THEY made a fortune with unright way,
Not because THEIR anger has hurt others around him.
It is because THEY WERE much too ignorant as a leader.

Among three poisons of humanANITY, 'Ignorance' is the most toxic, hazordous and deadly.

NOTE: THEY can be used singularly and for gender-neutral purposes. 



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