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For a happier future
Someone told me about a group of foreign brave students.They set an ambitious and charitable goal to support Indian teenagers from indigent families by getting qualitative education and jobs abroad! For me that's is a great impact to society! Students helped them to learn new subjects and pass exams successfully. I hope I can to repeat this experience.I was started with a small step.
I came to India as a volunteer and worked in a school with kids from Kaljanpuri's slums, Delhi.
I think my teaching plan wasn't be professional and systematic. But I am sure that's drawing, learning new English words and reading were helped kids to feel unity and equality between each other. Further is more.
I believe our communication became a reason to learning good for a happier future.
For a happier future
Someone told me about a group of brave, foreign students.They set an ambitious and charitable goal to support Indian teenagers from indigent families by getting qualitative education and jobs abroad! For me that's is a great impact to society! Students helped them to learn new subjects and pass exams successfully. I hope I can to repeat this experience.I was started with a small step.
I came to India as a volunteer and worked in a school with kids from Kaljanpuri's slums, Delhi.
I think my teaching plan wasn't be professional and systematic. But I am sure that's drawing, learning new English words and reading were helped kids to feel unified and equal between each other. Further is more.
I believe our communication became a reason to learning good for a happier future.
Great job! Note that with the verb 'feel', you must use an adjective rather than a noun.
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