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Hi people, I'd like improve my introduction in the itakki. So, I wrote a text below. What do you think?
"Hello. My name is Fernando e I'm Brazilian. I live in Curitiba, south of Brazil. I'm credit analisty for a bank. I love soccer, to read, go at gyn, video-games and go out with my friends. I like english and want be fluenty, because enghish is the most important language for business and travel. My english is intermediate, level B1, however, I'm improving each day. I'm native speaker in portuguese and I can help you in this language. "
Thank you
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Introduction
Hi people! I'd like to improve my introduction on iTalki. So, I wrote a text below. What do you think?"Hello. My name is Fernando and I'm Brazilian. I live in Curitiba, in southern Brazil. I'm a credit analyst for a bank. I love soccer, reading, going to the gym, playing video-games and going out with my friends. I like English and want to be fluent because English is the most important language for business and travel. My English is intermediate, level B1, however, I'm improving each day. I'm a native speaker of Portuguese and I can help you in this language. "
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Great job! The important thing as a beginner is to try hard and to make mistakes, so well done for writing a long, challenging paragraph. You should revise your hobbies and practice speaking about them with a native speaker :D
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Introduction
Hi people, I'd like improve my introduction in the itakki. So, I wrote a text below. What do you think?"Hello. My name is Fernando and I'm Brazilian. I live in Curitiba, in southern Brazil. I'm a credit analyst for a bank. I love soccer, reading, going to the gym, playing video-games and going out with my friends. I like English and want to be fluent because English is the most important language for business and travel. My English is intermediate, level B1, however, I'm improving each day. I'm a native speaker of Portuguese and I can help you in this language. "
Thank you
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