Nate
How do I like to be a speaker? Since I've been joined in a speech club for almost two years, at first I just want to be more confident on the stage, but I've noticed that I start to enjoy giving speeches in front of people. I think about the reasons why I'm into it recently, and the first reason comes up with me is, Sharing your ideas with people, help people start something new. Through our own stories or stories we've known, we can notify the audience what we've learned from the experience, then the audience can change their hehaviors or think about it, no matter is a new idea or something common, just share it, what's obvious to us can be amazing to someone else. Every time when I finish my speech, some people would come to me and share their ideas or stories, or they tell me how the message impresses them, it would make me happy. Also, I learn a lot from their feedback, it pushes me to do it better or give more speeches. I will keep going on my speech journey. It is fun and fullfilling.
17. Mai 2017 09:21
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How do I like <strike>to be</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">being </font>a speaker?

<strike>Since</strike> I've been<strike> joined</strike> in a speech club for almost two <font style="background-color: yellow;">years<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">. <font style="background-color: yellow;">At fir</font></font></font>st I just want<font style="background-color: yellow;">ed</font> to be more confident on the stage, but I've noticed that I <font style="background-color: yellow;">have</font> start<font style="background-color: yellow;">ed</font> to enjoy giving speeches in front of people. I <font style="background-color: yellow;">have been </font>think<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> about the reasons why <strike>I'm into it</strike> recently, and the first reason <font style="background-color: yellow;">I have come up with </font><strike>comes up with me</strike> is,

Sharing your ideas with people, help<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> people start something new.

Through our own stories or stories we've known, we can <strike>notify</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">tell </font>the audience what we've learned from the experience, then the audience can change their <font style="background-color: yellow;">b</font>ehaviors or think about it. <font style="background-color: yellow;"> It does not</font> <strike>No</strike> matter <font style="background-color: yellow;">if it </font> is a new idea or something <font style="background-color: yellow;">we have in </font>common, just share it, <font style="background-color: yellow;">because </font>what's obvious to us can be amazing to someone else.

Every time <strike>when</strike> I finish my speech, some people <strike>would</strike> come to me and share their ideas or stories, or they tell me how the message impresses them, <font style="background-color: yellow;">and </font>it <strike>would</strike> make<font style="background-color: yellow;">s</font> me happy. Also, I learn a lot from their feedback, it <strike>pushes</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">encourages </font>me to do it better <strike>or</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">and </font>give more speeches.

I will keep going on my speech journey. It is fun and <font style="background-color: yellow;">fulfilling</font>.

 <em>very good Nate!  D</em> 

17. Mai 2017
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