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Zilya
A dinner Hello, everyone! Do you like Indian kitchen as me? I love it so much! It"s so spicy and hot and rich!!! I love the zira in the ghi, a flavour of garam masala. When I am feeling an aroma of Indian kitchen I think that my bood start to move faster. And It"s for me - the scent of travel because the real Indian food I tried when I was aboard - in Shi lanka, Indonesia, Singapour. And I consider to make today Indian food. Maybe I want a little fest for me and my family? The fest on my table and my mind) I made samosas and the tomaten soup with Indian spices.Samosas were really delicious! I made 14 pieces - 8 without spices for my son and 6 with for me. I ate 2 pieces becouse they were so yummy! And I think "I'll eat more when I'll come back from my hairdresser" But when I came I saw that both plates was empty! I was really surprised! I said to my son: "You are a lange feeder!!! Why did you do it?"

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A dinner

Hello, everyone!

Do you like Indian kitchen cuisine as much as me?
I love it so much! It's so spicy, and hot, and rich!!! I love the zira in the ghi, a flavour of garam masala. When I am feeling an the aroma of an Indian kitchen, I think that my blood start to move circulate faster. And It"s For me, it's the scent of travel because of the real Indian food I tried when I was aboard in Sri Lanka, Indonesia, and Singapore.

And (<--It's best not to start sentences with conjunctions.) Today, I consider have decided to make today Indian food. Maybe I want a little feast for me and my family and me? (<--Always put yourself last.) The feast is on my table and in my mind)

I made samosas and the tomato soup with Indian spices. The samosas were really delicious! I made 14 fourteen (<--It's best to write out most whole numbers less than 100 as words.) pieces -- eight without spices for my son and six with spices for me. I ate two pieces because they were so yummy!
And I think thought, "I'll eat more when I'll come back from my hairdresser," but when I came home, I saw that both plates was were empty! I was really surprised! I said to my son, "You are a large feeder / big eater!!! Why did you do it?"

Nicely written, Zilya! I hope my corrections and notes are helpful. Please feel free to ask any questions. Now I'm hungry for Indian food! =)

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