Summer Holiday

Summer holiday is the best time to relax and enjoy with my family and my friends. Yesterday, my class went to Halong Bay, where which is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and popular travel destination in Quang Ninh Province, Vietnam. We had a wonderful time. And we stayed there for one day. But we had an interesting experience. recently. **
Halong Bay is really interesting. The Bay is very large, the water here is very soft and the environment is very purse pure/unpolluted.The weather was hot and sunny all day. In the morning, we went to Vincome Plaza Halong to watch the Baywatch movie. Then we ate a buffet at a restaurant. The food was extremely delicious. In the afternoon, we went to Sun World Halong park. There are so much play in here ->There is a lot to do there. The sea was cool and clear. We went swimming and played for three hours. Then we took the cable car. It is funny. We could see beautiful scenery when we were at the top. It was the best feeling. We took a lot of photographs. In the evening, we ate chicken hotpot to finish the trip.
We hope to go there again.

**In this case the word 'recently' is just out of place. 
It sounds like you enjoyed the trip. I hope to go to Halong Bay one day soon. Keep writing and remember: 'ate' is past tense for 'eat'.

Summer Holiday

Summer holiday (or holidays) is are the best time to relax and enjoy myself with my family and my friends.Yesterday, my our class went to Halong Bay, where is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and popular travel well-travelled destination in Quang Ninh Province, Vietnam. We had a wonderful time. And Dedpite the fact thet we stayed there for one day, .But we had an interesting experience recently.
Halong Bay is really interesting , the Bay is very large, the water here is very soft and calm and the environment is very purese.The weather is hot and sunny all day. In the morning, we went Vincome Plaza Halong to watch Baywatch movie.Then we eat ate buffet in restaurant. The food was extremely delicious. In the afternoon, we went Sun World Halong park. There are so much play in there. The sea was cool and clear. We went swimming and playing in three hours. Then we took the cable car. It is was funny. We can could see beautiful scenery when we were at the top. It was the best feeling. We took a lot of photographs. In the evening, we eat ate hotpot of chicken to finish the trip.
We hope to go there again.