Can you correct my mistakes please? Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must have the title: A Family Celebration Last saturday, whole my family celebrated the birthday of my brother. My parents did him a surprise party in a boat near of a beach in Mogan with his friends and family. We have been organizing this party for several weeks. We had rented a boat because my brother loves the sea. Also, we had bought a lot of food and drinks, and I decided to hire to his favourite musical band called Sunset. It was a amazing birthday party. When he arrived to boat, he was very happy and grateful with us. Besides, his friends gave him a wonderful present to enjoy it with his girlfriend. All in all, we enjoyed of a day in family although my parents spent a lot of money in this party. However, they had fun dancing with my family for whole afternoon.