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Jada Chang
May 18, 2011 Shinning Days Finally I got the book from Amazon after nearly 2 months. So exciting! Once I thought I would lost it. I did a not bad presentation to the smartest persons in the world. They were so nice and talented. Hope one day I can work with one of them! I am still writing the paper which I have been doing for almost a year! Strangely, my boss didn't push me. An old friend will come to visit me. We haven't seen each other for 6 years. She was talktive and sexy, and she was sleeping above me when in college. OK, I want my life a diamond, and it is!

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May 18, 2011 Shining Days

I finally received the book I had ordered from Amazon having ordered it nearly two months ago.  I had thought it was lost in the mail.

I did a reasonably good presentation to the 'smartest people in the world.'  They are so nice yet talented.  I hope one day I can work with at least one of them!

I am still working on writing the same paper for almost a year!  Strangely enough, my boss hasn't been pushing me.

An old friend will come to visit me. We haven't seen each other for 6 years.   She was talkative and looked sexy.  She slept in the bunk above me in college.

OK, I want my life a diamond, and it is!
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*When woman describes another woman as sexy, it gives the reader visions different than perhaps what you intend.  You definitely want to separate this from the next thought about sleeping.
*What does it mean when you want your life a diamond?
*What is a Shinning Day?  Do you mean Shining?
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yea. you know well .^_^. ~
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***Thank you, olivia, how are you doing recently? *** Thank you, 野比 のび太 O(∩_∩)O~
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Wish draw near to the dream step by step！
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The words" I want my life a diamond, and it is!",is the highlight.

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