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Practicing kanoe kayak Hello to you who takes time to read my notebook entry! I did kayak once in my countryside. I waited a long time because I am not really a sporty person. I like individual sports because I am not good at collective sports with balls. I love nature, doing simple trekking and swimming. When I am thinking about it, kayaking looks like logical because it brings most of what I like from other sports; contemplating nature, calming my nerves and related to water. I also like yoga and practice it every morning because it is so relaxing and calming. I am not living in my birthplace. In fact, I am living in another country: the UK. I am living in a seaside resort area. However, I will do river kayaking not sea kayaking. I want to try but first I want to kayak down a river. I love changeS of landscapes at each watershed. The river I'll ride is really calm. I might try roughER when I acquire more experiences. Thank you for taking time to correct it. :-)

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Hi Lilli,

I would be happy to make some suggestions on your English. The main suggestion I have is to organize your thoughts, so I rearranged your entry that way.

Canoeing and Kayaking, from a beginner's point of view.

Practicing kanoe kayak

Hello to you who takes time to read my notebook entry!

I did kayak once in my home country. I waited a long time because I am not really a sporty person. I like individual sports like (give examples) I love nature, doing simple trekking and swimming. When I  think about it, kayaking is logical for me because it offers most of what I like from other sports; contemplating nature, calming my nerves and being in the water. I also like yoga and practice it every morning because it is so relaxing and calming.
But I am not good at team sports, especially ones with balls. .

I am not living in my birthplace now. In fact I am living in another country: the UK. I am living in a seaside resort area. However, I will do go river kayaking not sea kayaking. I want to try sea kayaking one day but first I want to feel comfortable kayaking down a river. I love changeS of landscapes at each (maybe you mean) bend in the river watershed. The river I'll ride is really calm. I might try roughER water when I acquire more experiences.   J'espère que vous trouverez mes suggestions utiles. Moi, j'étude le Français. Ted




Thank you for taking time to correct it. :-)

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Bonjour Lili. Oui, je vous apprécie beaucoup si nous pouvons étudier français et anglais ensemble. Par écrire ou conversation? Si par conversation, bien sûr, mon skype est l.meriwether. Habituellement, mardi soir, c'est un bon moment pour moi, mais ce mardi prochain, je vais voyager pour assister à l'éclipse. Mais vous me dites, quelle est le bon moment pour vous. À bientôt. Ted

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