Note about myself (Could you correct me, please)
It is hard to write about myself. I think people surrounding me appraise me subjectively and I appraise people as well. My name is Olga. I was born on the 15 of September 1996. I'm from Rostov-on-Don. It's southern Russia.
I have a large family with two older brothers.
I'm 4 year law student Russian State University of Justise. Now I am getting a proper training in such subjects as legal theory, civil law, constitutional law and other branch of law because I have to take state exams at the end of study year.
When I look at myself in the mirror I see average height girl who has nutbrown hair and green eyes.
I like when people are kind, outgoing, optimist and honest. I like sincere people.I hate it when people are spontaneous and infantile.
I am interested in sport, fitnes. I like readind and writing. I adore biathlon. My favourite sportsmans are Emil Hegle Svendsen, Iohannes Bo, Martin Fourcade and Russian national team. I devote much time to learning english and studying.
Thank you for your attention.
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(A) Note about myself. (Could you correct me, please?)
It is hard to write about myself. I think people surrounding me appraise me subjectively and I appraise people as well. My name is Olga. I was born on the 15th of September, 1996. I'm from Rostov-on-Don. It's in southern Russia.I have a large family with two older brothers.
I'm a 4th year(or you can just say senior) law student at Russian State University of Justise. Now/Currently I am getting a proper training in subjects, such as legal theory, civil law, constitutional law and other branches of law,/; because I have to take state exams at the end of (the)study year.
When I look at myself in the mirror, I see an average height girl who has nutbrown hair and green eyes.
I like when people are kind, outgoing, optimistic and honest. I like sincere people, and I hate it when people are spontaneous and infantile.
I am interested in sports and fitness. I like reading and writing. I adore biathlon. My favourite sportsmans (athletes?) are Emil Hegle Svendsen, Iohannes Bo, Martin Fourcade and the Russian national team. I devote much time to learning English and studying.
Thank you for your attention.
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Note about myself (Could you correct me, please)
It is hard to write about myself. I think people surrounding me appraise me subjectively and I appraise people as well. My name is Olga. I was born on the 15 of September 1996. I'm from Rostov-on-Don. It's southern Russia.I have a large family with two older brothers.
I'm a Russian law student in my 4th year law student at the Russian State University of Justice. Now I am getting a proper Currently, I'm studying training in such subjects including legal theory, civil law, constitutional law and other branch of law because I have to take the state exams at the end of study year.
When I look at myself in the mirror I see an average height girl who has nut brown hair and green eyes.
I like when people are kind, outgoing, optimist and honest. I like sincere people. I hate it when people are spontaneous and infantile.
I am interested in sport fitness. I like reading and writing. I adore biathlon. My favourite sportsmans are Emil Hegle Svendsen, Iohannes Bo, Martin Fourcade and the Russian national team. I devote much time to learning English and studying.
Thank you for your attention.
You write well with a few errors. Before you post your writing, read it over out loud to yourself and you'll probably find where you can improve how to phrase clear English.
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