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The autumn
The autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all, because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city.When the autumn comes the leaves on them become red, yellow and brown. I think it's very beautiful. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in the autumn. :)
So, I always look forward to this time. And now I can clearly feel and see that the autumn has come to my city.
Autumn There is no rule for articles, and Americans and the British use them differently. Learning them simply takes practice.
Autumn is my favorite (American: favorite; British: favourite) season. Why do I love it? First of all, I (the sentence needs a subject) love it because of its colors (American: colors; British: colours). When autumn comes, the leaves on the trees become red, yellow, (some put a comma after "and", but others don't) and brown. I think it's very beautiful. I also like my shoes and my coat that I can only wear in autumn.
I always look forward to this time, and now I can clearly feel and see that autumn has come to my city.
Это хорошо. Я понимал.
Most Americans would say "fall" instead of "autumn."
Also, I tried to correct your post in autumn colors.
The Autumn
The autumn season is my favourite season. or "Autumn is my favourite season" There is no "the" as there is only one autumn but there are four seasons and so you need "the". Why do I love it? First of all, It's because of its colours. There are a lot of many trees in my city.When the autumn comes the leaves on them become turn into reds, yellows and brown. I think it'sVery beautiful indeed. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in the autumn. :) Then I can also wear shoes and the coat I love that are appropriate for this time of the year. So, I always look forward to this time. And now Autumn is now at my city's doorstep. I can clearly feel and see and feel its presence. that the autumn has come to my city.
The autumn
Autumn is my favourite season. Why do I love it? First of all because of its colours. There are a lot of trees in my city.When autumn* comes the leaves on them turn red, yellow and brown. I think it's very beautiful. And I also like my shoes and my coat that I can wear only in **Autumn. :)
So, I always look forward to this time. And now I can clearly feel and see that autumn has*** come to my city.
*or, when Fall falls ...
**Autumn, Spring, Summer, Winter, like Sun, Moon, ... can be capitalised. This is today rather old-fashioned, but still good English.
***or, that Autumn is come to my city. (literary English sometimes uses 'is' instead of 'have' here).
Very well written!
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