The best place I have ever visited
Have you ever visited Paris? It’s one of the most famous city of the world and it’s know with the nickname of “city of light”.
First time that I visited it, I hoped to see many light for all side. But no, Paris sleep at night. The nickname is because it had a good university where fabulous ideas emerged.
There are many place to visit and my favourite place is the Eiffel Tower, which, nowadays, is illuminated.
The best part of the trip was to see “Mona Lisa” paint. It is inside the Louvre museum.
There’s so much to do and to see in Paris. If you ever get a change to go there, don’t miss it.
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The best place I have ever visited
Have you ever visited Paris? It’s one of the most famous city of the world(cities in the world) and it’s know with the nickname of “city of light”. (known by the nickname City of Light. [ or, more naturally, "it is nicknamed City of Light" ])The First time that I visited it, I hoped to see many light for all side(many lights from all sides). But no, Paris sleepsleeps at night. The nickname is because it had a good university where fabulous ideas emerged.
There are many place to visit and my favourite place is the Eiffel Tower, which, nowadays, is illuminated.
The best part of the trip was to see “Mona Lisa” paint(painting). It is inside the Louvre museum.
There’s so much to do and to see in Paris. If you ever get a change to go there, don’t miss it.
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The best place I have ever visited
Have you ever visited Paris? It’s one of the most famous cities of/in the world and it’s known with by the nickname (of) the “city of light”.The first time that I visited it, I hoped to see (many) light(s) for on all sides. But no, Paris sleeps at night. The nickname is because it had a good/celebrated/famous university where fabulous ideas emerged.
There are many places to visit and my favourite (place) is the Eiffel Tower, which, nowadays, is illuminated.
The best part of the trip was to see the “Mona Lisa” painting. It is inside the Louvre (museum).
There’s so much to do and to see in Paris. If you ever get a chance to go there, don’t miss it.
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