Cycling to Huanchaco
For everybody who doesn't know it, here it goes. Huachaco is a gorgeous and touristic beach in the north of Peru, about 13 km from Trujillo.
Today, I went there cycling from Trujillo round trip. It was awful, my legs and arms still hurt cause I hadn't ridden this distance before, but the experience was amazing and 100% recommended.
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This is my first entry and I'm sorry it is that short. I'll keep you updated on my new adventures in this country, so you can get into my culture.
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Cycling to Huanchaco
For everybody who doesn't know, it, here it goes. Huachaco is a gorgeous and touristic beach in the north of Peru, about 13 km from Trujillo.Today, I went there on a round trip, cycling from Trujillo. round trip. It was awful, my legs and arms still hurt because I hadn't ridden this far distance before but the experience was amazing and 100% recommended.
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This is my first entry and I'm sorry it is that short. I'll keep you updated on my new adventures in this country, so you can get into my culture.
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Cycling to Huanchaco
For everybody who doesn't know, here goes. Huachaco is a gorgeous and touristy beach in the north of Peru, about 13 km from Trujillo.Today, I went cycling there and back starting from Trujillo. It was awful and my legs and arms still hurt because ('cause is only common in spoken speech) I had never ridden this far before, but the experience was amazing and I 100% recommend it.
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This is my first entry and I'm sorry it is that short. I'll keep you updated on my new adventures in this country, so you can learn more about my culture.
Bien trabajo! Your grammar is very advanced and your storytelling is very cohesive. Keep at it!
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Cycling to Huanchaco
For everybody who doesn't know it, here it goes : Huachaco is a gorgeous and touristic beach in the north of Peru, about 13 km from Trujillo.Today, I went there cycling from Trujillo round trip. It was awful, my legs and arms still hurt because I hadn't ridden this distance before, but the experience was amazing and 100% recommended.
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This is my first entry, and I'm sorry it is that short. I'll keep you updated on my new adventures in this country, so you can get into my culture. very good writing, I sure you can do a longer story next time.
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very good writing, I sure you can do a longer story next time.
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good job ! try also this website : https://writeandimprove.com/ its free and you can post your writings on both : italki and W&I ... good luck :)
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