(informal letter) request for a contact
Hello! I am a music graduated from China. I am passionate in singing and have been looking for a teacher for a long time. I have found some Youtube videos of Ms Angela and Ms Coleman, the teachers from ABC University, they have superb techniques and I would love to learn from them. I have been searching for their contacts but in vain. During my searching I found out your page and know that you have studied in ABC school before. Do you know them and could you give me their contacts?
Thank you very much for your help. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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The target is a graduated who have studied at the university before. The tone of the letter seems not polite enough ..but I have no idea how to make it looks more polite ..:/
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