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29/11/17 Some people who have never been single, they will never know the happiness of freedom and independence to live their lives. Some people who have never been a couple, they will never know the happiness and warm heart that have someone who always be with you. However, it has a double-edged sword. You should balance your happiness do not put your happiness in others hands because at last no one can live with you forever. You must stand and strong by your self.

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29/11/17

Some people who have never been single, they will never know the happiness of HAVING THE freedom and independence to live their lives. Some people who have never been a couple in a relationship, they will never know the happiness and THE warm FEELING IN YOUR heart that have having someone who always be with you GIVES YOU. However, it has is a double-edged sword. You should balance your happiness.  Do not put your happiness in others hands the hands of others because at last in the final analysis no one can live with you forever. You must stand and BE strong by your self yourself.

People who have never been single will never know...  you don't need to say 'they' again or use a comma.



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29/11/17

Some people who have never been single they will never know the happiness, of freedom, and independence it can bring to to live their lives. Some people who have never been part of a couple they will never know the happiness and warm heart  feelings that it brings  to have someone who will always be with you. However, it has can be a double-edged sword. You should balance your happiness do by not put putting it your happiness in others hands the hands of others because, in the end,  at last no one can live with you forever. You must stand and be strong by your self yourself.

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