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Prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extend do you agree or disagree. It is argued that some wrongdoers should be punished by doing social work for free instead of being sent to prison. I absolutely agree with this statement because working for community's benefit they would save the government's money instead of consuming it, moreover, they won't be involved in the criminal environment. Being employed to social work without salary, offenders would save taxpayer's money instead of consuming it. I think that people that weren't indited for major crimes could be exploited in works that predict a hard physical labor or a minimum wage like retirement home's personal, streets cleaning and others. This approach would allow the government to save a large sum of money on salary and meeting daily requirements a person in prison that could be spent on medicine or educational development. For instance, an experiment that was conducted in Brazil in 2010 shows that exchanging jail time to social valuable job allows to cut prison's foundation by 15% and save for budget 10% of a social workers payment. I believe that some people that were put behind bars could avoid being involved in the criminal environment if they did work for community's sake for free. Unfortunately one of the hardest things of imprisoner's life is criminal surrounding that can be dangerous for person's mental and physical health, in some cases people can't go back to the normal life. For example, a recent survey shows that 75% of ex-prisoners in Russia were forced to devote themselves to criminal's career because of the criminal surrounding, whereas only 10% of all people that get done free work for the community perpetrated crimes again. In conclusion, I want to say that people that weren't convicted of a major crime should be made to do unpaid community work it could allow to reduce spending budget money and offenders would brush with criminal world, as a result, the country there would be additional money for social development and person could live without immersion in criminal world.

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First paragraph is good.

It is argued that some wrongdoers should be punished by doing unpaid community service instead of being sent to prison. I absolutely agree with this statement because working for a community's benefit, they would save the government's money instead of consuming it. Moreover, they wouldn't be involved in a criminal environment anymore.

By being occupied with unpaid community service, offenders would save taxpayer money instead of consuming it. I think that people that have not been indicted for major crimes could be put to work at jobs that require hard physical labor or only the minimum wage, like retirement home's personnel, streets cleaning and others. This approach would allow the government to save a large sum of money on salary and meeting the daily requirements of a person in prison that could be spent instead on medicine or educational development. For instance, an experiment that was conducted in Brazil in 2010 shows that exchanging jail time for socially useful community service allows prisons to cut their operating expenses (?) by 15% and save for budget 10% of a service worker's payment for the budget.

I believe that some people that were put behind bars could avoid being involved in the criminal environments in the future if they did unpaid work for community's sake for free. Unfortunately one of the hardest things in a prisoner's life are the criminal surroundings that are dangerous for person's mental and physical health.  In some cases people can't go back to a normal life. For example, a recent survey showed that 75% of ex-prisoners in Russia were forced to devote themselves to a life of crime because of a criminal surrounding, whereas only 10% of all sentenced to unpaid service for the community perpetrated crimes again.

In conclusion, I want to say that people who have not been convicted of a major crime should be made to do unpaid community work. It could allow for a reduction in spending budget money. As a result, there would be additional money for social development and the ex-prisoner could live without future run ins with the criminal world.

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