Beyond the corner. Please, correct my mistakes
Sherlock Holmes and dr. John Watson walked upon Baker Street.
"Watson, let's bet on 5 pounds. When we turn beyond the corner and go upon the lane we will be attacked"
"Well, let's do this. I guess we won't be fought!" Watson replied.
Holmes and Watson noticed some men after that they turned behind the corner. One moment later gentlemen were beaten by the men. When they stood up Watson gave Holmes five pounds. Then he asked:
"Holmes, how did you figure it out? Due to you unusual logic? Or deductive method?"
"What the crappy logic? What the deductive method! It's simple, Watson! Yesterday in evening I fucked around here!"
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Beyond the corner. Please, correct my mistakes
Sherlock Holmes and Dr. John Watson walked upon were walking down Baker Street."Watson, let's bet on 5 pounds. I bet $50. I bet on a horse race. I bet $50 on a horse named Tom at a horse race. You could also say "make a 5-pound bet." When we turn beyond the corner and go upon the lane, we will be attacked."
"Well, let's do this. I guess think/say/predict we won't be fought have to fight!" "I fought him"="he fought me", so use the active verb instead of the passive.Watson replied.
Holmes and Watson noticed some men after that they turned behind the corner. One moment later the gentlemen were being beaten by the some men. Use "the" when you can answer the question "which ones?" "Which gentlemen?" "Sherlock Holmes and Dr Watson." "Which men?" "I don't know. Just some men."When they stood up Watson gave Holmes five pounds. Then he asked:
"Holmes, how did you figure it out? Due to your unusual logic? Or your deductive method?"
"What the crappy logic? What the deductive method! It's simple, Watson! Yesterday in evening I fucked around here!"
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