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Minimalism
I like the minimalistic lifestyle very much this lifestyle. I'm not a rigid follower of this philosophy but I admire it and try to apply some of its concepts in my life. When I read the book "Less is more", I cleaned up my room and gave away many clothes, shoes and others. Another thing that I did was to open an account on a site in wich which sells selling second-hand things. I put advertised many things there to sell and ^my business was brisk. sold well. I #earned a handsome profit. gained a good money. I didn't sell my things just to make money. I sold my things by at a low price because I learned that sometimes we have many things at home that we don't even use, but these things can be very useful such usefull to other people. I sold my violin * very cheaply much cheap (I bought it to learn how to play it, but I gave up and stopped practising my violin was stopped for many years). I was very happy when I sold it because when the buyer received the violin, he sent an email to thank me thanking for my honest in the description of the product, as well as the authentic picture of the violin on the site. He said he was very happy because he could learn how to play this instrument from now on.It is this so very satisfying, isn't it?
Hi Kellen,
Whenever I do spring-cleaning, I am forced to decide which items I genuinely do not need and I must say that it's a very therapeutic process and I enjoy it.
^ We use the phrase "business was brisk" to mean that your business was good.
# It is unnatural to say that we "gain money". We "earn money" or "earn a profit". We can also use "handsome" with "profit" to mean that we earn a huge profit.
* We do not write "I sold my violin much cheap" because you are describing how you "sold" (verb) it. We use adverbs (such as "very" and "cheaply") to qualify a verb.
Cheers
Minimalism
I like this lifestyle a lot. I'm not a rigid follower of this philosophy but I admire it and try to apply some of its concepts in my life. When I read the book "Less is more", I cleaned up my room and gave away many clothes, shoes, etc. I also opened an account on a site where you can sell second-hand things. I put many things there to sell, and I sold well. I made good money. I didn't sell my things just to make money, though. I sold my things for a low price because I learned that sometimes we have many things at home that we don't even use, but these things can be useful to other people. I sold my violin very cheap (I bought it to learn how to play, but I gave it up many years ago). I was very happy when I sold it because when the buyer received the violin, he sent an email to me thanking me for my honesty in the description of the product, as well as the authentic picture of it. He said he was very happy because he could learn this instrument from now on.This is so satisfying, isn't it?
Minimalism
I likenot very clear, maybe it would work better: i stopped playing the violin
Congrats for what you did! :)
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