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Grandfather. Part 2 You can read beginning of the story here https://www.italki.com/notebooks/886911 It was just another day in the beginning of the war. My granddad with a bunch of the other soldiers had a meal gathering around the field canteens. As usual, they ate shitty-tasted porridge. My grandfather quite loudly said how gruesome the taste was. It happened the political commissar* heard that, and that night he called my grandfather in. * Political commissar. In the military, a political commissar or political officer (or politruk, from Russian: политический руководитель, "political leader"), is a supervisory officer responsible for the political education (ideology) and organization of the unit they are assigned to, and intended to ensure civilian control of the military. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Political_commissar To be finished
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Grandfather. Part 2

You can read beginning of the story here https://www.italki.com/notebooks/886911

It was just another day in the beginning of the war. My granddad, with a bunch of the other soldiers, (1) had a meal gathering gathered around the field canteens. As usual, they ate shitty-tastedtasting porridge. My grandfather quite loudly said how gruesome (2) the taste was. It happened that the political commissar* heard that overheard, and that night he called my grandfather in.

* Political commissar. In the military, a political commissar or political officer (or politruk, from Russian: политический руководитель, "political leader"), is a supervisory officer responsible for the political education (ideology) and organization of the unit they are assigned to, and intended to ensure civilian control of the military.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Political_commissar


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(1) you've taken a break from the sentence to add an aside so you would add bracketing commas.  Alternatively you could drop the commas and say "My grandad and a bunch of the other soldiers had a meal gathered around the field canteens"

(2) technically a correct adjective but this would sound out of place here.  Gruesome is generally too strong to apply even to the worst-tasting food.  It's more commonly associate with things that are morbid, horrifying or violent.

24. März 2018
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