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Today's news Today was very hot,I sweated. I was day off,so I went to see a movie of Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excited. I recommend it. 今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。 我推荐。

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Thank you for reading my diary in every time. I can not write long yet.But I want to be able to write long . so I keep study hard. Please teach me
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Today's news

It Today was very hot today,that's why I was sweated. It was day off, so I went to see a movie of "Pirates of the Caribbean". It was funny and exciteding.(I was excited) I recommend it.

今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。

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Corrected from reading your Chinese into the way an English speaker would write.

I am sweating because of today's heat.  I needed the rest and so I went to see the "Pirates of the Caribbean".  Made me happy and elated.  I recommend it.

 

Today's news

Today was very hot,I sweated. I was day off,so I went to see a movie of Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excited. I recommend it.

今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。

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Today's news

Today was very hot, so I sweated. I was had a day off,so I went to see a movie of called Pirates of the Caribbean. It was funny and excitedexciting. I recommend it.

今天很热。我出了汗。我休息。我去看电影的加勒比海盗。这个开心和兴奋了。
我推荐。

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ok,i will see it.

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