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Please help me to know and correct my mistakes! What is Football ? What is football ? Is it a sport ? Is it a business? Or... ? What you think ? I think football is more than a sport and more profitable than business and more influential than diplomacy ! Football is caltures' confliction . Football clubs are built on different opinions , also they have different goals and different ways to reach their goals . There are many kind of sports and each one has particular fans or supporters . But football is about epidemic . Children , men , women, even old men and old women intrested in football during an important match such as world cup final. Football players are so beloved and they are very affective on society . At least you have seen a billboard with a football player's photo in your city certainly. For this reason football is a big money maker! Clubs pay much money for buy popular players to use them for earning more money ! In many countries we see football as a reason for people to celebrating and forget hardships like war and starvation. Finally I must say football is the biggest social phenomenon at 21 century !
26. Apr. 2018 00:36
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What is football ? Is it a sport? Is it a business? Or...  <font style="background-color: yellow;">w</font>hat you think ?

I think football is more than a sport<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> <strike>and</strike> more profitable than business and more influential than diplomacy !

<font style="background-color: rgb(156, 198, 239);">Football is caltures' confliction</font> . Football clubs are built on different opinions, <strike>also</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">and </font>they have different goals and different ways to reach <strike>their</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">these</font> goals .

There are many kind of sports and each one has particular fans or supporters . But football is <strike>about</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">an</font> epidemic . Children, men, women, even <strike>old men and old women</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">elderly people are </font>int<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">e</font>rested in football during an important match such as <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">W</font></font>orld <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">C</font>up final.

Football players are <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">very much loved </font><strike>so beloved</strike> and they are very <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">e</font>ffective <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">i</font>n society. <strike>At least</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Y</font>ou <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">will certainly </font>have seen a billboard with a football player's photo in your city <strike>certainly</strike>. For this reason football is a big money maker! Clubs pay <strike>much</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">big </font>money <strike>for</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">to </font>buy popular players to use them for earning more <strike>money</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">revenue</font>!

In many countries we see football as a reason for people to celebrat<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">e</font> <strike>ing</strike> and forget hardships like war and starvation.
Finally I must say football is the biggest social phenomenon <strike>at</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">of the </font>21<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">st</font> century !

<em>I do not understand  <font style="background-color: rgb(156, 198, 239);">Football is caltures' confliction</font></em>

<font style="background-color: rgb(156, 198, 239);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><em>very good!!</em></font> </font>

26. April 2018
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