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Write an essay answering the question below security cameras do not belong in educational institutions. Do you agree? The question is whether security cameras are needed or not in educational institutions. Each day more educational institutions install cameras in its installations in order to increase the students security. Students are an easy target, and they could be victims of different type of crimes. Moreover they could feel threatened inside educational center. In fact, nowadays, there are much violence in the school, and often, teachers can’t made anything to protect students. Therefore installing surveillance device is a good way so as to increase safety and deter crime in educational institutions. It’s common knowledge that the installation of cameras is a legitimate way to loose the privacy, and most of time without our consent. Students are being observed all time. They are under pressure, because each little mistake or upset situation is recorded and might be motive of punishments by educational institution. For example, if student throw a paper on the floor, instead put it inside the paper bin, security official may take disciplinarian actions. It’s worth eliminate potential criminal in the educational centers whether freedom is eliminated too.

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Write an essay answering the question below.

Security cameras do not belong in educational institutions. Do you agree?
The question is whether security cameras are needed or not in educational institutions. Each day more educational institutions install cameras in its installations their premises/buildings in order to increase (the students)* security.
Students are an easy target, and they could be victims of different types of crimes. Moreover, they could feel threatened inside educational center. In fact, nowadays, there are is much violence in the school and often, teachers cannot made do anything to protect students. Therefore, installing surveillance devices is a good way so as to increase safety and deter crime in educational institutions.
It is common knowledge that the installation of cameras is a legitimate way to loose the invade privacy and most of time without our consent. Students are being observed at all times. They are under pressure, because each little mistake or upset unusual situation is recorded and might be motive of for punishments by educational the institution. For example, if a student throws a paper on the floor instead putting it inside the paper bin, security officials may take disciplinary actions.
It’s worth eliminate potential criminal in the educational centers whether freedom is eliminated too.

Is it worth eliminating potential criminal activity in the educational centers if freedom is eliminated too?

* The cameras do not only increase student security (they are not selective). The cameras record events that affect security in general, students, visitors, staff and property.

I took the liberty of rewriting your final line of text to make it less confusing.

Well done.

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