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I Had a Wonderful Sunday My younger brother have an appointment with the neighbor, a father and son to climb Qingyuan mountain on Sunday. It is a very famous scenic spot in our city and our country. They also asked me to join in. I’ve drove there two times before, but never walked up to the top of the mountain. After running for a month, I feel a little confidence that I can have a try, so I agreed to come with them. It opens to tourists at 8:00a.m. every day. To avoid the crowds, we decided to start off earlier. We drove to the foot of the mountain at 6:00, and began to walk to the top of the mountain. It is a long way and the stone stairs are steep. During this journey, we took some rest for several times before we reached the top. When we got there, it was 8:40a.m. Then we could have breakfast there. People here usually make a pot of tea, order some authentic food like pureed noodles, vinegar meat, fried nori, peanut soup etc. Normally we’d like to spend a morning or an evening here to chat with friends and families. As I had a date with my colleagues, so we went down the mountain after breakfast. Just went home to take a shower, I then went to the restaurant which we booked online. Finished lunch, we went to the KTV for singing and dancing for a whole afternoon. And then we had hotpots for dinner. When I back home, it was 9: 00p.m. Although I was tired after the whole day, I was very happy.

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I Had a Wonderful Sunday

My younger brother had a date with the neighbors, a father and son, to climb Qingyuan mountain on Sunday. It is a very famous scenic spot in our city and our country. They asked me to join them. I had driven there twice before, but never walked up to the summit. After running for a month, I felt quite confident that I could try, so I agreed to come with them.
It opens for tourists at 8:00a.m. every day. To avoid the crowds, we decided to start off earlier.
We drove to the foot of the mountain at 6:00am, and began to walk to its top.
It is a long way and the stone stair is steep. During this journey, we paused several times before we reached the top. When we got there, it was 8:40a.m. Then we could breakfast there. People here usually pour a pot of tea, order some authentic food like pureed noodles, vinegrette meat, fried nori, peanut soup etc. Normally we’d like to spend a morning or an evening here to chat with friends and families, but I had a date with my colleagues, so we went down the mountain after breakfast.

Just after coming home and showering, I then went to the restaurant which we booked online. After lunch, we went to the KTV for singing and dancing for a whole afternoon. And then we had hotpots for dinner.

When I back home, it was 9: 00p.m. Although I was tired after the whole day, I was very happy.

Very well written!

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