Senderismo
Hello, Yestarday was a special day, because we went to Ifonche of walk, with all my co-workers. A very relaxing place, and I had a great time.
I think, in another moment I`ll go alone. This sport it`s hard for me because my knees. But I liked it.
The best of the route, lots of laughs.
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Senderismo
Hello, Yesterday was a special day because I went walking in Ifonche, with all my co-workers. It is a very relaxing place, and I had a great time.I think, in another (time) I`ll go alone. Walking is hard for me because of my knees. But I liked it.
The best of the route, lots of laughs.
Your meaning was clear. Moment is used to express time, but in this case a moment is too short a period of time to work. Day, week, month, year, etc would work better.
Moment shows a very short period of time passing. It only took a moment for the car to fly past.
Your last paragraph also needs extending, for example: It was an excellent route, we all had lots of laughs. You could also add an image of what caused the laughs - We all had lots of laughs when Simon tripped over a small stone!
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