Check it out and correct it please! Meow :)
I must admit I remember my life without computer. it's not as scary as it might seem. At the first I had a lot of books. At the second I was going for a walk a lot picking some flowers. I was a little at all and I prefer living in my cozy world without computer games and a lot of information. Certainly I was seen cartoons and series on TV. It was so exciting to try coming home in time to watch my favourite cartoons. But I have to admit having a computer is much more comfortable when you are adult person. For working as a minimum. A job takes the most time of your life. You have less opportunities and free time for hobbies. In that case having a computer is much more comfortable than do not. How am I supposed to train speaking in foreign languages for instance?
Besides there a lot of minuses also. When you work for 8 hours sitting at the computer every day you get chronic disease. So do not forget going for a walk from time to time and doing elementary exercises. So take care of yourself!
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Check it out and correct it please! Meow :)
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Check it out and correct it please! Meow :)
I must admit that I can remember my life without a computer. it's not as scary as it might seem. In the first place I had many books. In the second I walked a lot picking flowers. I (was a little at all?) and I prefer living in my cozy world without computer games and lots of information. Certainly I watched cartoons and series on TV. It was so exciting to try to get home in time to watch my favourite cartoons. But I have to admit that having a computer is much more comfortable when you are adult. (For working as a minimum?). A job takes most of your time. You have less opportunities and free time for hobbies. In that case having a computer is much more comfortable than not. How am I supposed to practice speaking foreign languages for instance?Besides, there a lot of minuses too. When you work for 8 hours sitting at the computer every day you get chronically fatigued. So do not forget to go for a walk from time to time and to do elementary exercises. So take care of yourself!
very well written if a little obscure in parts.
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