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Think for a moment We all fantasize about a better life, sometimes we think that a certain day according to our personal circumstances would be the start of a happy life. The period between that date and the current moment is perceived as uncountable days of our lives, because it's full of pessimism and frustrations,we feel that all days are similar and boring. I think such a thought is a silent killer, and might destroy us. We must take advantage of every single moment of our lives as long as we are healthy and are still breathing. First we should learn how to enjoy life and we should also learn how to love other people which is the key to have a healthy and satisfied conscience. If we could reach that point of equilibrium we would be able to feel that ourlives are full of wonderful meanings and a lot of things that make us feel sorry about the lost days of our lives.

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Think for a moment.

We all fantasize about a better life. Sometimes we think that a certain day, according to our personal circumstances, would be the start of a happy life. The period between that date and the current moment is perceived as an uncountable period of our lives, because it's full of pessimism and frustrations. We feel that all days are similar and boring.
I think such a thought is a silent killer and might destroy us. We must take advantage of every single moment of our lives as long as we are healthy and still breathing. First we should learn how to enjoy life;  we should learn how to love other people, which is the key to having a healthy and satisfied conscience. If we could reach that point of equilibrium we would be able to feel that our lives are full of wonderful meaning, and we would feel sorry about the days of our lives lost to pessimism and frustration.

(I had a native speaker check it for you. She writes for a company's social media account)

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