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My family Hi everyone,

Today i'm going to talk about my family.

I live in Milan with my family which is made by me, my mom and my sister.

I'm Alessia and I'm 23.

I love spent time with my family walking in the park, riding horse, watching Tv or talking about our future projects. I love walking with my dog, Milton, and he's very special for me because I adopted him during a bad time. So I love nature, dogs and any kind of animals.

I frequent University to become a geophysicist and after graduation I hope to move in England where my fiancè lives right now.

My mom is my best friend, we're very close and we do all things together. Maybe It could sound strange but she is my superhero because she grew me and my sister up without the support of our father.

My sister is my little monkey, she's 12 and she's so different than me. She loves painting, creating and she has a lot of immagination ( I have a mathematical mind). She has passion for animals and nature too.

So this is my little but cute family. We're stronger day after day and nothing could sepate us.

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My family

Hi, everyone!

Today, I'm going to talk about my family.

I live in Milan with my family which is made by consists of myself, my mom and my sister.

I'm Alessia and I'm 23.

I love spending time with my family, walking in the park, horse riding horse, watching TV or talking about our future projects. I love walking with my dog, Milton. and He's very special for me because I adopted him during a bad time. So I love nature, dogs and any kind of animals.

I frequent go to university to become a geophysicist and after graduation I hope to move to in England where my fiancè lives right now.

My mom is my best friend, we're very close and we do all things together. Maybe it would sound strange but she is my superhero because she grew brought me and my sister up without the support of our father.

My sister is my little monkey, she's 12 and she's so different than me. She loves painting, creating and she has a lot of vivid imagination while I have an analytical mathematical mind. She has passion for animals and nature, too.

So this is my little but cute family. We're stronger day after day and nothing could separate us.

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Hi everyone,

Today I'm going to talk about my family.

I live in Milan with my family which is made of me, my mom, and my sister.

I'm Alessia and I'm 23.

I love spending time with my family; walking in the park, riding horse, watching Tv, or talking about our future projects. I love walking with my dog, Milton, and he's very special to me because I adopted him during a bad time. So, I love nature, dogs, and any kind of animal.

I attend University to become a geophysicist and after graduation I hope to move to England, where my fiancè lives right now.

My mom is my best friend, we're very close and we do all things together. It may sound strange, but she is my superhero because she raised me and my sister without the support of our father.

My sister is my little monkey, she's 12 and she's so different than me. She loves painting, creating, and she has a big imagination ( I have a mathematical mind). She has passion for animals and nature too.

So this is my little but cute family. We're stronger day after day and nothing could sepate us.

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Hi everyone,

Today, I'm going to talk about my family.

I'm Alessia and I'm 23. I live in Milan with my family which is made by consists of me, my mum and my sister.

I love spent to spend time with my family walking in the park, riding horses, watching Tv or talking about our future projects. I love walking with my dog, Milton; and he is very special for me because I adopted him during a bad time. So I love nature, dogs and any kind of animals.

I frequent attend University and hope to become a geophysicist and after graduation, then I hope to move in England where my fiancè already lives right now.

My mum is my best friend, we're very close and we do all things together. Maybe, It could may sound strange but she is my superhero because she grew me and raised my sister and I, up without the support of our father.

My sister is my little monkey, she is 12 and she's so different than me. She loves painting, creating and she has a lot of imagination (I have a mathematical mind). But like me, she has a passion for animals and nature too.

So this is my little but cute family. We are stronger day after day and nothing could sepate separate us.

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I helped with some things, but grammar is not my strong suit. Your family sounds nice, by the way!

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