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A water mist for human A water mist for human in Northern line’

When I went to the London bridge station in Northern line, I felt cold and dry. I wanted a piece of water. Actually, it is the deepest line in London and the atmosphere is really artificial and inorganic. I thought why people in London had made this tube under a ground deeply. I needed a sunlight and pure moisture…!

This model-making is for the human to transfer from over the ground to under the ground: it is a water mist for human’s relief. In addition, I wanted to create the anti-monument that shows the transformation from dirty to the purified in the human mind.

*After Isabel’s impression of my work, I modified a bit in terms of scale.

**The following photo is from Roppongi in Tokyo. We used to enjoy the Japanese humid summer by taking these mist.

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A water mist for human people

A water mist for human people in the northern line:

When I went to the London bridge station in the northern line, I felt cold and dry. I wanted a piece drink of water. Actually, It is the deepest line in London and the atmosphere is really artificial and inorganic. I thought wondered why people in London had made (built) this tube under a ground deeply so far underground. I needed a sunlight and pure moisture…!

This model-making is for the humans (people) to transfer from over the above ground to underground. It is a water mist for human’s people's relief. In addition, I wanted to create the anti-monument (? I don't understand.) that shows the transformation from dirty to the purified (clean) in the human mind.

*After Isabel’s impression of my work, I modified it a bit in terms of scale.

**The following photo is from Roppongi in Tokyo. We used to enjoy the Japanese humid summer by taking these mist.
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"Human" sounds very stiff and scientific. It's better to use "people" in this case.

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