Practice witting
Running is my favorite sport. I started running since last year. Now I run with my boyfriend almost every day from 6.00 P.M. to 7.00 P.M. We run around the village for 5 round. Approximately 5 KM. We never join the running event. We run for get strongly heart and good health. We decided to attend the running event in the future. I should practice every day to build self-discipline. I need to challenge myself.
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Practice witting
Running is my favorite sport. I started running since last year. Now I run with my boyfriend almost every day from 6.00 P.M. to 7.00 P.M. We run around the village for 5 (?) round. Approximately 5 KM. We never join the running events. We run for get strongly to strengthen our hearts and good health stay healthy. We decided to attend the a running event in the future. I should practice every day to build self-discipline. I need to challenge myself.I don't understand what you mean by "round" in "run around the village for 5 round". Perhaps you mean "laps" as in "I ran 5 laps around the track"
I changed "attend the running event" to "attend a running event" because you don't mention any specific event, although both are grammatically correct.
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