I wrote an essay, please help me correct my faults, thanks! Topic:In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children) . To what extent do you agree or disagree? With the development of era, people pay more attention to equality which between the gender. Today in many countries, people support the viewpoint that women work everyday like what men do, so men should share the housework tasks equally. In my opinion, I can't agree this view any more. We are in a progressive and enlighted society, gender equality is a difficulty problem that we try our best to overcome. In previous, because of men have strong bodies so that women stay at home do housework and men earn money is a common phenomenon. But today more and more women are excellent and they also do full-time jobs.Thus we need to reconsider housework tasks' distribution. Women also need time to do their work but they often be tied down by household chores. So men share housework is a good way to solve this problem, and this is well reflected to the problem gender equality. Doing housework equally not only do help to gender equality but also have many other advantages. First of all, that can promote the mutual affection between couples. The rising cost of living leads to both marriage partners have to work, so if men share part of housework, that must can strengthen their relatives. Moreover, this change can help promote equally in other areas including education, promotion of workplace. In conclusion, breaking gender inequality in the housework benefits the families and the society, thus governments can encourage promote that it is fair and reasonable for males to share the housework.