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Study till the last moment or having a job whenever you were ready? For years a little boy of our story tried to get away from the school, and when his father asked why? he always shouted the same answer, I don't like our teacher, he makes me to do a lot of homework , can't take it anymore His father was really a patient person, when our little boy got away from the school when he was in seventh grade, his father decided to talk to him about having job rather than going to school, awesome!  This is the best day ever in my entire life!! Little boy said, So he gave up the school and started to think about his own job, He was only 13 years old, his father said nobody in the world going to help you, even me, so be aware of your passions and abilities to create or find a good job for yourself What do you think about that story? There are 3 kinds of people here to answer this question 1.people who can't believe!!!! They say :Do we have any other choices rather than going to school in our childhood?! Never, We have to go to school till 18, it's really clear, no degree, no money, no money, no marriage, no marriage, no happiness, so it's better to die! All the ordinary people think like that 2. people who say :children work will kill their childhood, kids have to play, have to be happy, job will kill emotions and happiness it will make children like a emotionless stone! 3. People who agree with our little boys father, they say we have to remind our children How big they are, How valuable they are, they can do everything they want, they have the soul of God, God can do everything so they can as well! What's your idea about it?

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Study till the last moment or get a job as soon as you are ready?

For years the little boy of our story tried to get away from the school, and when his father asked why he always shouted the same answer, "I don't like our teacher, he makes me do a lot of homework , I can't take it anymore."
His father was really a patient person, and when our little boy was soon to leave the school in the seventh grade, his father decided to talk to him about getting a job rather than going to school, "Awesome! This is the best day ever in my entire life!!" the little boy said.
So he gave up school and started to think about his own job, He was only 13 years old, his father said nobody in the world is going to help you, even me, so be aware of your passions and abilities to create or find a good job for yourself.

What do you think about that story? There are 3 responses
1.people who can't believe!!!! They say ":Do we have any other choice than going to school in our childhood?! Never, We have to go to school till 18, it's really clear, no degree, no money, no money, no marriage, no marriage, no happiness, so it's better to die!" All ordinary people think like that.
2. people who say :working will kill their childhood, and kids have to play, have to be happy. A job will kill emotions and happiness and turn the child into an emotionless stone!
3. People who agree with our little boy's father. They say we have to remind our children how big they are, how valuable they are, that they can do anything they want, they have the soul of God, and God can do anything as can they!!

What do you think?

Very well written!

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