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My diary This is my second try to keep a diary. Today I was really tired, bacause I didn't seep all nigth. Well, my daughter has been sick. So she has needed more attention and love. Her sister was all day with her grandmother and aunt, luck for me. I didn't do a lot of things at home. All day I have watched cartoons as tinga tinga and pow patrol with my daughtet. As for me, I watched the cilling adventure of Sabrina. It's awsome) . Now,day is ending and I'm trying to sleep. Thanks for reading

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My diary

This is my second try to keep attempt at keeping a diary. Today I was really tired, because I didn't seep all night. Well, my daughter has been sick. So she has needed more attention and love. Her sister was all day with her grandmother and aunt all day, lucky for me. I didn't do a lot of things at home. All day I have watched cartoons as tinga tinga and pow patrol with my daughter. As for me, I watched the cilling* adventure of Sabrina. It's awesome) . Now, the day is ending coming to an end and I'm trying to sleep. Thanks for reading

* maybe you meant Thrilling? I really don't know...

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My diary

This is my second try at keeping a diary. Today I was really tired, because I didn't sleep all night. My daughter has been sick, so she has needed more attention and love. Her sister was with her grandmother and aunt all day, luckily for me. I didn't do a lot of things at home. All day I have watched cartoons like tinga tinga and pow patrol with my daughter. As for me, I watched the chilling [thrilling?] adventures of Sabrina. It's awesome) . Now, the day is ending, and I'm trying to fall asleep. Thanks for reading
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This is my second try to keep a diary. Today I was really tired, bacause I didn't seep all nigth. Well, my daughter has been sick. So she has needed needed more attention and love. Her sister was all day with her grandmother and aunt all day, luck for me. I didn't do a lot of things at home. All day I have watched cartoons as tinga tinga and pow patrol with my daughter all day. As for me, I watched the cilling adventure of Sabrina. It's awsome) . Now,the day is ending and I'm trying to sleep. Thanks for reading


Overall good basics, if you ever want to work on vocabulary, natural pronunciation and writing feel free to book a class with me. 

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