You need to capitalize all your "i"s and proper nouns.  A side note, since you are learning English, I just want to alert you to the name, "Fido".  It is a common name in the English language to call the name of their dog pets, "Fido".  I do not know If this is a name given by yourself in jest or not...  I am not only correcting people's English here on ITALKI but also to advice them on cultural faux pas as well.  So if you don't want people to laugh behind your back, by all means, keep using this cute name :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Fido,21 years old,I graduated from faculty of law 2010,I love english and need learn alot and i wish finding what i want in this site .