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New job resolutions Tomorrow is my first day to work at a pharmaceutical company in Korea. I got hired as a Medical Representative and I have some resolutions for my new job. First, I want to work hard. I am a beginner in the business area, so this is my first job after graduating my university. To work my way up in my career, I should work hard no matter how hard it is. Second, I hope I don't quit my work so fast. There is a trend that new recruits in Korea quit their first job faster than their supervisors expected. These are most important things for my first job resolutions. I hope I will do my best !

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Nicely done! Here are a few corrections:

New job resolutions

Tomorrow is my first day to work working at a pharmaceutical company in Korea.
I got hired as a Medical Representative and I have some resolutions for my new job.
First Firstly, I want to work hard. I am a beginner in the business area, so this is my first job after graduating from my university. To work my way up in my career, I should work hard no matter how hard it is.
Second Secondly, I hope I don't quit my work so fast. There is a trend that new recruits in Korea quit their first job faster than their supervisors expected expect.
These are the most important things for my first job resolutions. I hope I will do my best !

Hope this helps and good luck with your new job! :)

-Effie

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First*, I want to work hard. I am a beginner in the business area, so this is my first job after graduating my university. To work my way up in my career, I should work hard no matter how hard it is.
Second**, I hope I don't quit my work so fast. There is a trend that new recruits in Korea quit their first job faster than their supervisors expected.

*Not "firstly."

**Not "secondly."

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@Luke Thanks for your comment :)
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Effie already did a great job correcting this for you, I'd just like to add a quick "good luck!" You're going to be great!

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