30 days writing challenge: 2 day Good evening!) Yesterday celebrate my boyfriend's father was great) I have got to taste a beshbarmak. It was the boiled chicken with the special dough and the onion th

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30 days writing challenge: 2 day Good evening!) Yesterday celebrate my boyfriend's father was great) I have got to taste a beshbarmak. It was the boiled chicken with the special dough and the onion that was boiled in the chicken bouillon. Traditionally, beshbarmak cooked with a horse meat or a lamb, but we don't like these kinds of meat. Especially a horse meat... I love horses, I can't eat them... The electric kettle broke, so we have decided to use a samovar. Don't laugh please, I know these jokes about Russia that we live with bears and drink a vodka in a samovar))) It's just coincidence, we don't have a samovar in each house)) So we boiled water for tea in the electric samovar. After that, we drunk tea with sweets, halva, and blackcurrant jam and conversed until 12 am. Our gift was a German tutorial because of my boyfriend's father wants to restore his knowledge of German.

11. Nov. 2018 19:13

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30 days writing challenge: 2 day

-- Sorry! Was it your boyfriend's father's birthday? Was it just a party at your boyfriend's father's place? Normally verbs specify an object to act on such as an event. Is that missing?

Good evening!)
Yesterday <strike>celebrate</strike> my boyfriend's father had a great celebration.) I <strike>have</strike> got to taste a beshbarmak. It was <strike>the</strike> a boiled chicken with the special dough and the onion that was boiled <strike>in the</strike> with chicken bouillon. Traditionally, beshbarmak cooked with <strike>a</strike> horse <strike>meat</strike> or <strike>a</strike> lamb, but we don't like these kinds of meat. Especially <strike>a</strike> horse meat... I love horses, I can't eat them...
The electric kettle broke, so we have decided to use a samovar. Don't laugh please, I know these jokes about Russia that we live with bears and drink a vodka in a samovar))) It's just coincidence, we don't have a samovar in each house))
So we boiled water for tea in the electric samovar. After that, we <strike>drunk</strike> drank tea with sweets, halva, and blackcurrant jam and conversed until 12 am.
Our gift was a German tutorial because <strike>of</strike> my boyfriend's father wants to restore his knowledge of German.

-- Sorry I did not know what a Beshbarmak was and had to "look it up"; What I found was that this "Beshbarmak is the national dish among nomadic Turkic peoples in Central Asia and Russia. It is also known as Naryn, as Turama/Dograma and as Kullama."

-- Neither did I know that a Samovar was "a highly decorated tea urn used in Russia."

Well written and culturally very enlightening A+ Your use of explanations was humorous and the visual imagery was excellent. My mouth was watering as I read your story.

11. November 2018