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CV - overview OVERVIEW ■ Strong experience in the management of research groups, R&D project portfolios, innovation programs, new product developments. ■ Broad knowledge of industrial and polymer chemistry, in particular in the field of fluoromaterials: melt processable polymers (PVDF, ECTFE, PFA, MFA), polytetrafluoroethylene, lubricant fluids and solvents (fluoropolyethers), fluoroelastomers (FKM, FFKM) ■ Focused on the big picture, consistent and committed on the company’s goals. Supportive and delegative with the team. I am pretty structured and rational but I love creativity. Innovation is my passion: more than 30 patents filed.

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CV - overview

OVERVIEW
■ Strong experience in the management of research groups, R&D project portfolios, innovation programs, and new product developments.
■ Broad knowledge of industrial and polymer chemistry, especially in fluoromaterials: melt processable polymers (PVDF, ECTFE, PFA, MFA), polytetrafluoroethylene, lubricant fluids and solvents (fluoropolyethers),  fluoroelastomers (FKM, FFKM), etc.
■ Focused on the big picture, consistent, and committed to the company’s goals. Supportive and delegative leadership style. I am pretty structured and rational but I love creativity. Innovation is my passion: I have filed more than 30 patents. 


Just a few suggestions on how to tighten the language up and make the bullet points clearer to the reader. I would eliminate the sentence about being structured and rational but loving creativity. You want the CV to whet the reader's appetite while not giving everything away. Plus I think since the next sentence describes your innovation and 30 patents, the other sentence is redundant. I would also challenge you to think of a different way to say "focused on the big picture" because that phrase is overused on resumes and CVs. (See: https://www.themuse.com/advice/3-overused-resume-phrases-that-everyone-still-insists-on-using) 

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