Christmas with family
This year, we passed Christmas in my family and in the family of my boyfriend. It was really nice but also exhausting like every years because we eat a lot and we were a lot on the road. I can't drive so my boyfriend drove almost 18 hours to go in the East and after in the West of the country in five days.
However, I'm not used to eat so much in my daily life because at work I don't really have time to lunch and I think this is the same for a lot of people, doesn't it ? By the way, I think I eat meat and seafood for the year in five days. Despite of this, it was a really nice moment with our families specifically because I saw my family that I didn't see since seven monthes and I met the daughter of my sister-in-law as well. She is incredibly cute (I am partial to babies so I think that almost babies are cute). I also offered and received a lot of gifts. Now, I'm thinking about making DIY gifts for the next Chrismas. I had some ideas but not so many time but I will try to do some of them by myself in 2019.
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Christmas with family
This year, we passed spent Christmas in with my family and in the family that of my boyfriend. (or "and my boyfriend's family") It was really nice but also exhausting like every years because we eat ate a lot and we were a lot on the road a lot. I can't drive so my boyfriend drove almost 18 hours to go in the East and after in the West of the country in five days. (Not sure what you mean here: "my boyfriend drove almost 18 hours going east and west across the country"?)However, I'm not used to eat eating so much in my daily life because at work I don't really have time to for lunch (or "to eat lunch") and. I think this is the same case for a lot of people, doesn't isn't it? By the way, I think I eat meat and seafood for the year in five days. (not sure what you are trying to say.) Despite of this, it was a really nice moment with our families, specifically especially because I saw my family that I didn't see since seven monthes (especially because I hadn't seen my family in seven months) and I met the daughter of my sister-in-law as well. (my sister-in-law's new baby). She is incredibly cute (I am partial to babies so I think that almost all babies are cute). I also offered gave and received a lot of gifts. Now, I'm thinking about making DIY gifts for the next Chrismas. I had some ideas but not so many much time but I will try to do some of them by myself in 2019.
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Good work, Harilanto. Other than a few phrases which were confusing, most of what you have written is understandable. I've made a few corrections and suggestions to help clear thing up. Kind regards.
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This year, we have passed Christmas in with my family and in with the family of my boyfriend. It was really nice but it is exhausting like every years, because we ate a lot and we had a lot enjoy on the road. I couldn't drive so my boyfriend drove almost 18 hours to go in the East and after in the West of the country in five days.
However, I'm not used to eat so much in my daily life because at work I don't really have time to lunch and I think this is the same for a lot of people, doesn't it ? By the way, I think I eat meat and seafood for the year in five days. Despite of this, it was a really nice moment with our families specifically because I saw my family that I didn't see since seven months and I met the daughter of my sister-in-law as well. She was incredibly cute (I am partial to babies so I think that almost babies are cute). I also offered and received a lot of gifts. Now, I'm thinking about making DIY gifts for the next Chrismas. I had some ideas but not so many,time but however I will try to do some of them by myself in 2019.
However, I'm not used to eat so much in my daily life because at work I don't really have time to lunch and I think this is the same for a lot of people, doesn't it ? By the way, I think I eat meat and seafood for the year in five days. Despite of this, it was a really nice moment with our families specifically because I saw my family that I didn't see since seven months and I met the daughter of my sister-in-law as well. She was incredibly cute (I am partial to babies so I think that almost babies are cute). I also offered and received a lot of gifts. Now, I'm thinking about making DIY gifts for the next Chrismas. I had some ideas but not so many,
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