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My sunday 19_01_19 My day went very full. How today is my last day of vacation I organized my things for tomorrow work. My desk was very tide and it was with my paper. It was hard but I won.

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My Sunday 1-19-19 or 1-19-19  19_01_19
My day was  went  very full. Or My day went very well. How Today is my last day of vacation. I organized my things for work tomorrow.  My papers are tidy on my desk. My desk was is very tide tidy. and it was with my paper. It was hard, but I won finished.


Your desk can’t be with your paper. The desk is the bigger object. How you have the paper or papers on or near the desk is what determines the accuracy of the sentence.

And is it paper—singular or papers—plural?


When you complete a task or something you are doing you have finished (finish is present tense).

Won is the past tense of win.

When you use the word won, that is used when referring to a race or competition or a bet.

Example: 1) I won the race.  2) We played the game and I won the bet. 3) The horses competed against each other and my horse won.

I hope this helps.

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My Sunday 19_01_19

My day went was very busy full. How Since today is my last day of vacation, I organized my things for work tomorrow work. My desk was very tide  messy and it was with all of my papers. It was hard but I won did it.


Your word choice like "won" was okay but I don't know if that's what you wanted to say to be quirky. I also feel like when you said 'my desk was tide" you meant tidy - but I feel like you meant the opposite. Since you used past tense, I'm assuming your desk wasn't tidy but then like you said, you got it organized for work tomorrow. I hope this helps! 

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My sunday 19_01_19

My day went was very full. How today is my last day of vacation I organized my things for tomorrow tomorrow's work. My desk was very tide tidy and it was filled with my paper. It was hard difficult  but I won.
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My Sunday 19_01_19

My day was very full.  Because today is my last day of vacation, I organized my things for work tomorrow. My desk was very tidy and it was with my paper*. It was hard, but I won.

*I'm not entirely sure what you mean to say here, so I'm not sure how to correct it. But perhaps a better way of forming this sentence might be "My desk was very tidy and my paper was on it," or "My desk was very tidy, and as was my paper." 

I hope I've been of some help. Good luck with your studies! 

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