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About My Life when I was studying at high school, I was not able to do something useful or unique I was not thinking about my future, even I was dreamless when I joined the college my life has completely changed I started to think about my future I decided to take some courses belong to my studies I have studied economics, sales, marketing, business management, accounting and politics I actually started to understand the market and the economy I also criticized some of the government's decisions And when I finished my college , I found myself as a big fan of learning new languages I'm fluent English speaker and by the time I'm 30 ,I hope I can speak English, Russian, French and German

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Hi Adel,

Thanks for sharing what is going on in your life.  I'm glad to hear that you are thinking about your future and making goals.  Living a purposeful life is the dream of every person, but not everyone goes somewhere on purpose.  Hope you make good progress on your dreams.  Here's some corrections.  I hope they are helpful for you.

Ben


About My Life

when I was studying in high school, I was not able to do something useful or unique (I would use the word purposeful instead of useful.  I think that is what you mean.)  (Also, you could say "I was not able to accomplish something ...".  Accomplish is a commonly used english word that means what you are trying to say, I think)
I was not thinking about my future.  even I was dreamless (I would say, I had no hopes or dreams, Dreamless isn't really the word you are looking for here) 
when I joined the started college my life has completely changed
I started to think about my future
I decided to take some courses belong to in my studies
I have studied economics, sales, marketing, business management, accounting and politics
I actually started to understand the market and the economy
I also criticized some of the government's decisions
And when I finished my college studies (or coursework), I found myself as a big fan of learning new languages
I'm a fluent English speaker
and by the time I'm 30 ,I hope I can speak English, Russian, French and German

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