First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is Isbel.And my Chinese name is zhouzhonghui. I'm studying in Dalian University of Foreign Language.After 4 year's studying,I want to go to America to realise my dream,to go on my study.And I believe deeply in road ahead.So in italki,I want to be friend with you.And I will share with you my happiness that you have never experienced.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is Isbel, and my Chinese name is zhouzhonghui. I'm studying in Dalian University of Foreign Language. After 4 year's years of studying, I want to go to America to realise realize my dream: to go on my study continue my studies. And I believe deeply in the road ahead. So in italki, I want to be friends with you. And I will share with you my happiness that you have never experienced.
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Very nice introduction.
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Thank you! Welcome to Dalian!
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Hi! I think Dalian is one of the most interesting cities in China, it has the annual international fashion show, the art festival, the festival of locust trees. I've read that it has very little air pollution and that its a summer resort too. It's a city with many architectural building styles, Russian, Japanese, Baroque, Neoclassical...also people speak standard mandarin so that's a good place to learn Mandarin Chinese If you are looking for someone to speak to, practice or help you with your English, I can do that, plus I like to learn from other cultures, and next year I'll start to learn mandarin Chinese.
Have a nice day! (the post from above had a mistake (Chinese mandarin) I couldn't delete it so I just wrote a new one and corrected it!
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Hi! I think Dalian is one of the most interesting cities in China, it has the annual international fashion show, the art festival, the festival of locust trees. I've read that it has very little air pollution and that its a summer resort too.
It's a city with many architectural building styles, Russian, Japanese, Baroque, Neoclassical...also people speak standard mandarin so that's a good place to learn Chinese mandarin
If you are looking for someone to speak to, practice or help you with your English, I can do that, plus I like to learn from other cultures, and next year I'll start to learn Chinese mandarin.
Have a nice day!
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