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Short scholarship letter. Thanks! I just wrote this motivation letter for my scholarship application. I have to keep it this short because of the word limit. Could you guys please help me with this letter, and maybe improve it? Thank you so much! :) As a design student who has experience studying in different cultures and interning in several studios, I have always been passionate about design and would like nothing more than to dedicate myself to it. Therefore, I applied for your program and scholarship for the same reason you want me, to create innovative solutions that truly inspire. This scholarship represents to me more than just encouragement, but a motivation that keeps pushing me to achieve the best that I can. I deeply aware that studying at your school is no easy feat, but I am so ready to take new challenges and willing to get my hands dirty, to create something new and different. I believed that the scholarship can help me carve my design career, and I intend to seize this opportunity wholeheartedly. Thank you for taking the time to evaluate this, and hope you have a great day.

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You have mixed up two things here -- the application letter (why you should accept me -- I'm passionate about design) and the scholarship letter (what school will do for me/what I will do for the school AND the scholarship would help or how the scholarship ). It is unclear if you have already been accepted to the program/school. If you haven't, your letter will look different than if you already have a place in the design program.
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I'd like to help. Please tell me the specific major you have chosen, ideally with narrow or more specific subspecialties. Also it would help to know which university and/or college. Finally, If you could wave a magic wand, what would you want them to do. Understand what? Decide what? Provide what? Why are you the best and most deserving applicant? What's the word limit? I look forward to your win!

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