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최근에 브로크백 마운틴라고 불리는 영화를 봤어요. 두 남자에 대해 이야기를 하고 그들은 관계를 맺어요. 영화는 몇 년 동안 그들을 뵈어요. 인생은 그들을 갈라놓아요 하지만 그들을 재결합해요. 이 영화는 정말 좋은 풍경이고 좋은 사진술이에요. 저도 산들이 가고 싶어요.
Recently I watched Brokeback Mountain. It talks about two guys that get into a relationship. It shows them through the years. Life tears them apart but they get reunited in the end. This movie has a really good scenery and photography. I want to go to the mountains too.
seems okay?
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최근에 브로크백 마운틴이라는 영화를 봤어요. 두 남자에 대해 이야기를 하고 그들은 관계를 맺어요. 영화는 몇 년 동안 그들을 보여줘요. 삶은 그들을 갈라놓아요, 하지만 그들을 결국엔 재결합해요. 이 영화는 정말 좋은 풍경이고 좋은 사진술이에요. (이 영화는 멋진 풍경과 영상미가 좋습니다.) 저 역시 그 산에 가고 싶어요.
BK:
Good job! It is good review. the sentences are almost perfect. I think your level of Korean is so good. In the meantime, there were few expressions which looks like little bit unnatural to me, native Korean speaker. Anyway, I want to cheer up for you to the better.
Have a nice day!
BK:
Good job! It is good review. the sentences are almost perfect. I think your level of Korean is so good. In the meantime, there were few expressions which looks like little bit unnatural to me, native Korean speaker. Anyway, I want to cheer up for you to the better.
Have a nice day!
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