Essay introduction practice
Under the pressure of competition among the growing population, it becomes almost obligatory for one to obtain an useful role in the collective life of our human family to be included by the society. Vulnerability, interpreted as a state of being exposed to injury, however, acts as a , preventing us from fulfill our expected role. Often times, as a result of the fear for being rejected by the society, we attempt to cover up our such disadvantages with fake identities. Alas, the reality does not always work out in our favour as ideal does. Literary works, in particular, have the ability to reduce individual's fear of exposing our vulnerabilities through analyzing the darkness of human nature. While the Kite Runner explores the significance of imperfections in Amir’s personal growth, in English by Gang Wang, the author takes a look at vulnerabilities’ impact at a macro perspective. Through the process of introspection, literature, to a certain extent, encourages me to embrace my vulnerabilities.
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Essay introduction practice
Under the pressure of competition among the our/Earth's growing population, it has become almost obligatory for one to obtain an useful role in the collective lives of our human family race to be included by the society. Vulnerability, interpreted as a state of being exposed/susceptible to injury, however, acts as a , prevents us from fulfilling our expected role. Oftentimes, as a result of the fear for of being rejected by the society, we attempt to cover up our such disadvantages flaws/fallibilities with fake identities. Alas, the reality does not always work out in our favour as ideal does. Literary works, in particular, have the ability to reduce individuals' fear of exposing our vulnerabilities through analysing* the darkness of human nature. While 'The Kite Runner' (2003), a novel by Khaled Hosseini,** explores the significance of imperfections in Amir’s personal growth, in 'English' (2004) a novel by Gang Wang, the author takes a look at the impact of vulnerability impact at on a macro perspective/level. Through the process of introspection, literature, to a certain extent, encourages me/readers*** to embrace my/their vulnerabilities.-
* analysing is British English, analyzing is American English. Because you have already used British English (for 'favour'), it's best to be consistent =)
** I think it's good to include the author's full name in the introduction of an essay. Afterwards, you can simply use their surname. You could also consider including the type of literary work it is (e.g. film, play, novel, etc.) and the date published.
*** In formal writing, it is best to use third-person. If this essay is not formal, please ignore this.
I hope this helps!
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