Time is so fast

It becomes cooler after raining. I thought summer is in the air. But it feels like the end of summer now. Sometimes I'm scared of time going fast. When I finished knitting a sweater, winter had gone. After the breeze, spring is ended. I haven't even seen cherry blossoms! Maybe autumn is coming after losing weight. When winter comes, I will gain weight again:( Then my time will go faster than last year.

Time is goes so  fast

It becomes cooler after the  raining. I thought summer was in the air. But it feels like the end of summer now. Sometimes I'm scared of time going quickly running fast. When I have finished knitting a sweater, winter had gone. After a breeze, spring has ended. I haven't even seen the cherry blossoms! Maybe autumn is coming after losing weight. When winter comes, I will gain weight again. :( Then my time will go faster than last year.

Time is so fast

It becomes cooler after raining. I thought summer is in the air. But it feels like end of summer now. Sometimes I'm scared of time running fast. When I finished knitting sweater, winter had gone. After breeze, spring is ended. I haven't even seen cherry blossom! Maybe autumn is coming after losing weight. When winter comes, I will gain weight again:( Then my time will go fast than last year.

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Jungmi씨~~

This entry is a bit old, but I see you didn't get a good response to help you write more natively. Let me try to help you!

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Native-style:

Time is so fast Time goes by/Time passes too quickly

It becomes cooler after raining. After it rains, the air feels cooler.

I thought summer is in the air. I thought I could feel the presence of summer in the air, but it felt more like summer was coming to an end.

But it feels like end of summer now. (combine this sentence with the sentence above! Native speakers rarely start a sentence with 'but!' hehe)

Sometimes I'm scared of time running fast. Sometimes, I worry that time is escaping me/Sometimes, I worry that time is passing too quickly.

When I finished knitting sweater, winter had gone.  Once I finished knitting a sweater I had been working on, winter had already passed.

After breeze, spring is ended.  After the breeze passed, spring ended.

I haven't even seen cherry blossom! I didn't even see the cherry blossoms!

Maybe autumn is coming after losing weight. After losing weight, autumn will surely come.  

When winter comes, I will gain weight again:( However, when winter comes, I will gain the weight back.

Then my time will go fast than last year. Then, time will pass even more quickly than it did last year. 

I hope this helps you! Please keep writing journals! I like your style of writing~ it's like poetry!

잠 잘했어요! 화이팅~~~ Don't give up :)